I am not untidy

This is an interesting piece of work. It reminds me of myself and my sister.

Bryony

UFO`S

Friday 29 december

the sky was flashing red. i ran outside and climbed over the fence in to the abandoned garden next door. bang! the sky was back to normal. a light clicked on and a 2 metre green alein steped out. the alien said to some one in the space ship” here bera bep blop”. An other alien stepped out of the space ship. “lat” the second alien said then to me “hi i am sdo and this is wdo. we are thinking that sould take someone from earth to our planet so we can have a relationship with earth. this is our smallest and fastest ship 2pq. so would you like to come with us?”. “ yeh”.

that was my diary entry i put in on the spaceship. but it was all a trick. as soon as i stepped out of the spaceship i two body gaurds jumped on me and tied my up. i struggled all the way to the room that they put me in that was right by all the ships. as soon as they were out of the room i wliggled my hand into my pocket and got out my new pocket knife. i quickly cut the ropes and sneaked out of the room. i looked around but there is no one so i run to 2pq and jump in. i cheek that the fuel tank is full and fly off home. i landed in my garage and pulled the garage door closed. i quikly run into bed and settle down to sleep. just one thing in my head, how will i explain this to mum and dad?

BY BRYONY

Poetry

I need to speak up and put more action