My learning goal is: to make my writing more interesting.
I can achieve it by writing descritive words and putting more humor into my writing.
Who can help me achieve my goal? Mrs Kenyon by telling me to write more stories and my self by writing lots of stories.
GREAT GOAL BROYONY!!
ReplyDeleteYou are working very hard on your writing Bryony. Your description you wrote when we were working outside this week is amazing. You have used a selection of adjectives and that makes your writing have 'voice'. Well done! Mrs K
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