You have set your poem out in the correct format which is fabulous. Lovely tidy work Bryony. Keep it up.
nice volcaneo need more bright colers
good work Bryony mabe next time you could use a bit more of bold colour!!
good brighter colours next time
You have set your poem out in the correct format which is fabulous. Lovely tidy work Bryony. Keep it up.
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ReplyDeletegood work Bryony mabe next time you could use a bit more of bold colour!!
ReplyDeletegood brighter colours next time
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